Your personal statement, marked like an admissions tutor would.
Send me your three UCAS answers. You get back a detailed written PDF — each answer scored against what medical and dental schools actually look for, with the weak lines quoted and rewritten. Within 72 hours.
Written by a tutor who has read hundreds of these. Not generated, not a template.
Three questions, not one essay
UCAS replaced the single statement with three separate questions. They are marked separately, so they get reviewed separately — a strong answer to one does not carry a thin answer to another.
Why do you want to study this course or subject?
Motivation. What actually pointed you at medicine or dentistry, and what you did about it.
How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?
Academic preparation. Subjects, wider reading, EPQ, anything you have studied that carries over.
What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?
Work experience, volunteering, employment, caring responsibilities — and crucially what you took from them.
UCAS allows 4,000 characters across all three combined. How you split them is a decision in itself, and the review covers it.
What lands in your inbox
A written PDF, typically several pages, specific to your statement. Not a checklist with your name at the top.
Each answer scored, with reasons
All three marked against the criteria medical and dental schools publish — motivation, insight, reflection, evidence. You see where each one sits and what is holding it there.
Your weakest lines quoted back
The sentences doing no work are pulled out verbatim and shown next to a rewritten version, so the fix is on the page rather than described.
Reflection gaps called out
The most common failure is describing what you did instead of what you learned. Every place that happens is marked, with a prompt for what belongs there.
Where your characters are going
A breakdown of how your 4,000 characters are currently split across the three answers, and whether that split is serving you.
Interview exposure
Claims in your statement that an interviewer will almost certainly ask you to defend — flagged now, while you can still decide whether to keep them.
A prioritised rewrite list
Ordered by impact, not by where they appear. The first three things to change, then everything else.
One read, or two
Same review either way. The only difference is whether I read your rewrite afterwards.
Both options include
- All three UCAS answers marked separately
- Weak lines quoted and rewritten
- Prioritised list of what to change first
- PDF back within 72 hours
Message me and I'll tell you the moment it opens.
You'll paste your three answers in straight after paying. The 72-hour clock starts when your statement arrives, not when you pay.
Three steps, one form
Pay
£40, or £50 if you want me to read your rewrite as well.
Paste your answers
You land straight on a form with the three UCAS questions. Paste what you have — a rough draft is fine, and honestly more useful than a polished one.
Get the PDF
It arrives by email within 72 hours of you sending the statement.
Before you buy
Will you write it for me?
No, and no honest service would. UCAS runs similarity checks and declaring work as your own when it is not is fraud. I mark what you have written, quote the lines that are not working, and show you what a stronger version of your own point looks like. The words you submit stay yours.
How long is the PDF?
It depends entirely on how much there is to say — a thin draft generates more notes than a strong one. It is written per statement rather than to a page count, and it quotes your actual sentences throughout.
Is it a person or a tool?
A person. I read it and write it. That is also why the turnaround is 72 hours rather than instant.
What if I've only written one or two of the three answers?
Send what you have. Paste a short note in the box at the bottom of the form saying which ones are unfinished, and I will review what is there and tell you what the missing answers need to cover.
Medicine or dentistry?
Both. You pick on the form, and the review is written against that course's expectations — they are not identical.
What does the re-check actually get me?
You rewrite, send it back once, and I read the new version and write you notes on whether the changes did what they needed to. It is a second read, not a second full PDF.
Can I get a refund?
You have 14 days to cancel a distance purchase, but by ticking the box at checkout you ask me to start straight away and accept that the right ends once the review has been delivered. If you have not sent your statement yet and change your mind, email me and I will refund you in full.
You only get to send it once.
Have someone read it properly before UCAS does.